Robot Rampage

WALT write a creative story using a story starler.

Surprisingly Hemi wakes up to the sound of people screaming and yelling with fear. Hemi looked around to see if his robot was there but it was not there. Hemi leapt out of his chair. Then he quickly ran around the streets to see if his robot was there. He couldn't find the crazy robot on the streets.

 He went around to people's houses and asked if they have seen a flying robot around “it just left” is all they said he started flying to the people’s  houses. Finally the last house came “have you seen this flying robot” they said it’s in the backyard destroying everything out there.

 Hemi went outside to grab it but then the bad robot the robot is as bad as a criminal. The robot grabs a flower pot and tries to chuck it at Hemi he misses him by far. Hemi ran over to the flowerpot and quickly grabbed it before the crazy robot could grab it .

 Hemi quickly chucked the pot at the robot and it blew up making a big mess at the ladies house. Hemi stayed and helped clean up the ladies house. When Hemi got home. Hemis Dad pulled up the drive . He went outside he said ‘WOW” you normally don’t like mowing the lawns. You can’t mow them more often. Hemi said “uhhh’. Hemi got his pocket money that he wanted.

Creative writing

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given. This week the words were pink, huge, bridge, sprinkled and daffodil.
By Aliyah

The long day

Me and my friend Merryn wanted to go to this huge pink lake that got a new bridge. All of the top was sprinkled with daffodil’s. I tried to pick a daffodil up but then I nearly fell into the water “Merryn grab me I said i’m going fall”. She caught me at the last second I was still terrified of how smelly and dirty I would have been if I did fall in there. Anyways I mean there could have been anything in there from a monster in the water to and old mans dirty crusty slipper. 

When we got back to my house I asked my mum if Merryn could have a sleepover she said maybe I will ask  Merryn if she can. Just when Merryn was going to leave my mum went over to her mum and said can Merryn have a sleepover her mum said yes. Merryn went back to her house to get her things for the sleepover . When she got back it was nearly dinner time so my mum said what should we have for dinner. Me and Merryn said McDonald's at the same time. My mum left to go get us McDonald's and then me and Merryn went to go play on the computer. We were playing on the computer. We went to go call my mum and see were she was because we were hungry. She said that she was 15 mins away. When she go home we ate all of our food. Then It was nearly bedtime so we both got in our pajamas to get ready for bed.

 When it was morning time for breakfast we had pancakes it was so yummy. When we were down eating our breakfast. When It got to 2:00 Merryns mum came and picked her up from my house. Just when she was walking out the door to leave she said this has been the best sleepover ever it was so much fun.


When she left I went to go visit my grandma in hospital. She was getting out of hospital. So we want to get her from the hospital because we haven't seen her in 2 months. When we got her we took her back to our house. We played a board game the game was called whats there name. It's a game where you have to guess what person the other person character. When we were down playing the game. We took my grandma home. After we did that. We got home and the time was bedtime so I went to go put on my pajamas. The next day was school. When I got to school Merryn was not there. I waited for her about 10 mins and she was not there so I just went home. The End

My Magical Creature 100 Word Challenge

WALT describe a Magical creature that lives in pink lake or animal .

Once Upon a time there lived a magical unicorn her name was Suger. She was a rainbow unicorn with a white body and she had a blue horn. She was in the magical animal hospital because she got a cut on her leg. That cut could make her lose her special powers forever. One day her best friend had to go in the animal hospital because she got the same cut on her leg. She was in same room with her friend Suger . When they got out of the animal hospital they were living at the pink lake .The End

100 word challenge

                                  SHOUTED CRIMSON MISTY FRANTICALLY GRAVE

Me and my friend Merryn were on our way to this house that people at school called it haunted. We just thought they were  joking around to make us scared. But we just wanted to see if it was actually haunted when we got there. There was a Misty backyard with a grave that had crimson blood spread on it.  Merryn Shouted HELP just when we looked at the backyard. When we went inside the house I was so scared that we Frantically ran back outside then we ran to go back home as fast as we could.

The End

100 Word Challenge Week 7

                     Handle cup 

In a forest far far away live a girl called Aliyah. It was her birthday on Sunday, she wanted a puppy for her birthday. Her Mum and Dad said “you can't get a puppy, what else do you want?” She said “A hideout cup with all my toys and Teddy bears.When you pull the handle the cup will lift up and I can go in it. “ Today’s my birthday I’m going to see if I got the handle cup with all my toys and Teddybears? I went outside and there it was a Handle cup my wish came true.

100 word challenge

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World Events for your writing

I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

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As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we… 

I woke up this morning, I was late for work so I ran out of my bed. I turn on my tv they said there was going to be a storm. So I  went in my car, I heard people calling for help. I looked back there was a  wave of mud coming down from the mountain. I hopped out of my car a girl came up to me and said

“Do you know where my mum is?” I said

“ No why?” she said “My mum is in the mud” I help her.  As the mudslide came crashing towards us...

The Magician

The Magician

I open my eyes and think, who did this to me? why am I here? did I do something wrong? I look up slowly at this huge building I had a feeling that I was here once before. I have a flashback to my childhood this was the orphanage that I grew up in. I remembered more the only reason I went in the orphanage was because my family home burnt down. It only burnt down because of me! My mother told me not to use the oven. I escape I but I never saw my little sister or mother again. I put my head in my hands, a single tear came from my eye. I get up and sadly walked and open the dark oak door and saw, a picture of me as a kid. I turned around “Slam” the door loudly shut, I run up to it I pull and pull but the door was locked. I look at the stairs, with a thought, who locked me in here? I need to get out. I cautiously went up the stairs. I see my childhood self running down the stairs, I watch him, he went through some boxes. I remember there was a back door to the yard. I quickly went down the stairs, and I moved the boxes. In the boxes I saw rusty old trophies, dusty art and board games I liked chest the best. I liked learning new strategies to win the game. I finally moved all the boxes and found the back door. I open the door, with a fancy golden knob, and carefully crept out the garden.  There was a rusty fence, with a little brown gate, I walk towards it. There was a creepy voice calls me back to the building. I have a feeling like there more in the orphanage, that meant to be me, but why? I kept going up the stairs then I saw my little old bed. On my bed there was a little teddy bear with a nametag that said Mr J. Stuffington. I loved he as a kid he was my favorite toy. I was heading to go up more when a gust of wind came out of nowhere. I look out through the window there was a tornado of wind it was huge. I could was it it couldn’t be… my mother and sister? I run down the stairs to the back door. I got to the front of the orphanage but I  kept getting pushed back the winds was very strong. I kept running and running towards it but the wind pushed me back into a puddle. My clothes were soaked I looked up the tornado of wind kept getting bigger and bigger. I saw books and leaves everywhere on the ground I noticed an umbrella I had an ideal. I grabbed the umbrella and climb up the ladder beside the orphanage then I made it to the top of the orphanage. I jumped the wind blew into the inside of my umbrella pushing me up. I was up above the tornado I didn’t notice it before but there was a person at bottom of the tornado. In the stranger's hand I saw a stick it looked like the stranger was controlling the tornado. I was above my mother and sister but I didn’t think about how to get them down. I let go of the umbrella I fell right through I was right beside the stranger and tackled him. The tornado stopped everything fell including my mother and sister. I grabbed his stick and pointed it at my mother and sister they gracefully glided down, they looked as light as a feather. I looked at the stranger as he got he looked like me? He spoke

“I am no stranger I am the magician or what you call me your conscience”. Really I thought

“I will bring you back to your world” he said.

“I have one question why did you bring me here” I said.

“I brought you here so that you know that it wasn’t your fault that your house burn down, nothing was your fault and that you should have no regret. I said

“When you go back you will not remember this every happened and you mother and sister will be with you” he said

He grabbed his stick and started floated he zapped us and we were back. Now I can live a happy life with my family once again and will not have any regret.

Somalia

Somalia           

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Click on the url below and watch the short clip.

Not far off the Somali coast one of the big Vestel cargo vessels is taken over by pirates! Within a split of a second the ship has a new captain, the soup is gone as well as the cargo itself. Will our Vestrons be able to strike back?

Somalia

Before you start writing think about the setting and imagine you are there.

Somali pirates take over a huge cargo freighter at sea. Things don’t look good for the crew, until the pirates start to investigate the cargo—Vestrons! Engage!

Create  

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots.

• Describe the setting in detail.Think about words to describe the situation, what you see, smell, taste, hear. Try to use words that create the mood.
• Now…..Write a first person narrative through the eyes of one of the crew or one of the robots. How you are feeling when the boat is invaded by pirates.

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Go to this padlet Somali and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

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Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.

  

It was  six am in the morning. I looked out my window  and I saw some pirates that  wanted to kill us . The pirates were trying  to get on the boat. The pirates threw their anchors on the silver rail and climbed up on the boat. The pirate ran though the white doors and went down stairs to the kitchen. One of the pirates tried the soup. The soup was as yummy as cake. The pirates were trying to look for treasure but they didn’t know it was robots. The robots were as silver as a chromebook. The pirates didn't find treasure in the containers. The pirates ran into the machinery area. The machines were as big as a elephant. The machines were as loud as a train. The pirates ran to the captain’s cabin. The pirates said give me the hat and keys. The keys were as silver as shells. The other pirates tried up the captain to a post. The post was a long as a pole. The robots started coming out of their containers. One robot came out of the roof and pushed a pirates into the sea. The sea was a blue as the sky. The pirate was a smelly as a rubbish bin. The robot pushed the pirates of the boat but the 3 in the captain’s cabin. One robot went into the captain’s cabin and tapped on one pirate's shoulder. The robot said look outside. The pirate said where are the other pirates. In the sea and died. The robot took the keys and hat away from the pirate and gave it back to the captain. The captain had a hot coffee. The coffee was as hot as chilli. The captain drove everyone back home.