Th WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man's point of view as he recall's his memories.
T The Piano
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Before you start writing
This video is about a man who remembers his past and recalls his memories. Think about how he would be feeling and other memories that this might trigger.
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WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man’s point of view as he recalls his memories.
Success Criteria
We need to focus on these things
- Full stops, capital letters,
- Paragraphs
- We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.
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The piano
By Aliyah
I am an old man I love playing the piano .I am going to play the piano for you.I am so sad because I am remembering all the things that happened in the past.I am remembering my wife and how she died.She died when we were having our wedding.She had a heart attack 3 years ago.I remember when it was my 10th birthday I got a horse stick that you can ride on I was so excited when I got it. When I was playing the piano I remember when me and my brother was in the war we went behind a black brick wall I said don’t go out there but he did and he go shot in my arms.My last words to my brother was I will miss you so much and I love you.You have been the best brother ever
.His last words were I love you so much you have been the best brother ever to me.
Hey Aliyah,
ReplyDeleteThis is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!
This is an amazing piece of imaginative writing. You have described the feelings of the old man really well, I could almost feel the same as him. This also made me think of my memories and memories of me playing the piano when I was younger. I used to hate playing the piano. Do you play the piano? Do you play any other instruments?
I would love to blog with you! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!
All the best,
Jade C.