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Tuesday 14 August 2018

The best and worst things about winter are......


The best and worst things about winter are…
 

Best Things about : That it snows Worst Things: That It rains a lot Winters great: because we get to do winter sports Winters not so great: because it is so cold What we can do only in winter: play with snow What can’t we do at winter: go to the swimming pool

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Aliyah, my name is Billie-jo from Marshland school, I love the way you used a lot of complicated punctuation. this reminded me of when it was once snowing at my house, maybe next time you could add some commas, what inspired you to do this?

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