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Wednesday 27 June 2018

Robot Rampage


WALT write a creative story using a story starler.


Surprisingly Hemi wakes up to the sound of people screaming and yelling with fear. Hemi looked around to see if his robot was there but it was not there. Hemi leapt out of his chair. Then he quickly ran around the streets to see if his robot was there. He couldn't find the crazy robot on the streets.


 He went around to people's houses and asked if they have seen a flying robot around “it just left” is all they said he started flying to the people’s  houses. Finally the last house came “have you seen this flying robot” they said it’s in the backyard destroying everything out there.


 Hemi went outside to grab it but then the bad robot the robot is as bad as a criminal. The robot grabs a flower pot and tries to chuck it at Hemi he misses him by far. Hemi ran over to the flowerpot and quickly grabbed it before the crazy robot could grab it .

 Hemi quickly chucked the pot at the robot and it blew up making a big mess at the ladies house. Hemi stayed and helped clean up the ladies house. When Hemi got home. Hemis Dad pulled up the drive . He went outside he said ‘WOW” you normally don’t like mowing the lawns. You can’t mow them more often. Hemi said “uhhh’. Hemi got his pocket money that he wanted.

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